You Broke it…!??!




“I have given up…” He says.
“Don’t…It’ll work out!! Trust me!!” She’s a little over Optimistic. Still!?
“They won’t agree…”- His voice is low.
“We’ll make them agree to it! It’s in our hands!”-She trembles.
“Destiny…”
“We’ll fight…just have faith.” She says.
“I know there’s NO hope” (acknowledge the bold and italics in “NO”)
“C’mon….there’s always a hope, we just need to hang on!”She means it too.
“Nothing will happen now” All of a sudden, he’s a stone…
Shit!- She thinks.
“It has to work out! Believe in it! We’ll try again, untill they agree. I’ll wait for 5 years and then 12 years after that too. I’ll wait. We can’t just call it a day off!! It deserves another try. Please….” She is hysterical, she is in love.

He says – ” It’s over baby.”

__________________
__________________
__________________ She is blank.

“It’s over” He says that again.
BLANK.
He can’t say this!
“Understand! I am equally hurt”
BLANK.
God, let this be a dream, pleaseeeeeeeee….
Boy ” I guess I never deserved you. We tried our best. some things are not meant to happen. I am ashamed. I will always love you. You deserve someone better than me, someone who can reciprocate to you, what you have done for me. blah blah blah….”
BLANK.
This can’t happen to me!!
No No No.

She can’t believe this. He can’t help her.
She won’t accept this. He won’t help her.
He is her life. She is over for him.
He moves on. She is still there.

Is that an end?
If yes, for whom?
If no, then what?



Sob – sob.
But this is exactly what’s happening around me, I see the girls bearing the brunt each bloody time. I cant preach, so I wont. I only hope it doesn’t happen to me.

Adi Crazy

Post Author: Aditi Mathur Kumar

Author. Traveller. Blogger. Talker. Eavesdropper.

4 thoughts on “You Broke it…!??!

    Anonymous

    (February 7, 2007 - 1:58 pm)

    It is more hurting when the sorrows which lies deep within someone’s heart are described in word. More pain goes to the one who has the will to express and describe the same on paper and speak the heart out!!!!

    The words here not only from one’s soul but depict a true, dedicated lover, who’s hope will never die and cannot think of any other option , other than her lover itself.

    BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO… to All such lovers … who keep on fighting for the one and only one …..

    wish life gives them the same kinda love and commitment they deserve and a true life partner.

    Angel

    (February 9, 2007 - 7:53 pm)

    Dekhna taqreer ki lazzat keh jo uss nay kaha
    Main nay yeh jana key goya yeh hi meray dil main tha
    ~Ghalib

    Anonymous

    (February 9, 2007 - 7:53 pm)

    It is more hurting when the sorrows which lies deep within someone’s heart are described in word. More pain goes to the one who has the will to express and describe the same on paper and speak the heart out!!!!

    The words here not only from one’s soul but depict a true, dedicated lover, who’s hope will never die and cannot think of any other option , other than her lover itself.

    BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO… to All such lovers … who keep on fighting for the one and only one …..

    wish life gives them the same kinda love and commitment they deserve and a true life partner.

    Gunveen

    (March 15, 2007 - 10:26 am)

    🙂

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